- daybreak eyes - Tuesday, October 20, 2009

I walk the line
In your daybreak eyes
For whom you ponder
For whom I surmise

Like leave-lets thrown
To a soggy wind
I follow your thoughts
I trace your whims.

To dance, in visions
Starry and gray
To fall through the aeons
And land in your day

I follow paths worn
Dull, and bland
To stray, to a ledge
To catch your hand

And where I wander,
May I stray
Into your eyes,
Into your day

Catching raindrops
On my thighs
I amble, softly
Through your sunset eyes.

4 Comments:

At 6:44 PM, Blogger Ruthie said...

i. fucking. love. this.
you have no idea. i love it. loove love love love it.
it almost reminds me of classic romantic love poems. its very simple and sweet and gave me chills! bahh kamsie.
screw homework, if you write like this for the rest of your life you will make a verry good living.
oh btw: read david levithan's "how they met (and other stories)"
it's a collection of his short stories, all about how random characters meet, and get pulled apart, and..ahh. it's fantastic. you would really love it.
i miss you.
you don't know my boy?!
hahh, it's okay. he's a newbie :]
damn, i wish he was my boy.
i have a very awkward/cute story for you regarding that...haha, you can help me decipher it.
the other chico esta muy confundido. as in, i don't know what the fuck is going on...as always. (he has daybreak eyes, though! that must count for something..ahahh.)

 
At 5:24 PM, Blogger Kick-butt soccer star said...

hahaha they for sure count for everything. i will read that. it sounds really good.
in turn, you have to read Ghostwritten by david mitchell. (ya its by black swan greens author but its very different. kind of about a noncorpum spirit that drifts from person to person, and spans people all over the world.)
its kind of amazing. its chilling

 
At 5:26 PM, Blogger Kick-butt soccer star said...

p to the s we very much need to chat. i need psychological counseling for my continuous pursual of the gayest straight boys i can possibly find.

 
At 5:47 PM, Blogger Ruthie said...

hahahaha "the gayest straight boys i can possibly find"
YES! we need to talk. my chicos are tres...interesante.
(that was just three languages in one right thurrr)

 

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