- ONe of the writing prompts i actually liked -
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Friday, December 07, 2007
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What are you so afraid of? Why won't you look me in the eye? Why are you so unwilling To show anyone that you cry? Why do you lay down before her heavy, monstrous, ugly, feet Why can't you find the stars among the sheets of pouring sleet?
What are you so afraid of? When love's up in your face Why can't you show these special ones How much you admire their grace? You're so scared of falling That you don't even try to stand Why can't you feel my body calling For the warmth of your hand.
Why can't you speak your mind without Putting everyone to sleep Why can't you have charisma And gain attention you want to keep Why are you so closed up all the time? And why are you so selfish? Why are the only tears that leave your eyes Procured by your own pain.
Why are you so afraid to think outside the lines? THat have been etched and deepend for years Within your frightened mind? Why are you so afraid to accept? And so afraid to question The only ones who count in this world Are the ones who don't fear redemption.
As we choose what genes we want to continue The blood to pump through our children We indirectly know What sill stop where, when, and why And we decide not to try.
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3 Comments:
holy shit.
kams, i kno u say that ur creative writing class is really boring, but trust me, ur poems are so wickedly awesomely kickass that i honestly don't think it matters...
i mean,
GOD.
how i would KILL to be able to write poems like that. i can't rhyme worth a damn, so most of mine are choppy and free verse.
i could very possibly be very jealous. lol
it's a compliment
take it.
ooh!!
i thought of one!!
you're a poet
don't u know it.
:)
i kno, so creative...
baaah!
kamsies go to my blog!
and check ur email!!
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